this is my first fic I have read with Chase in it....he is usually a character that is just "meh" for me so I avoid fics I know he has a part in. You made me like him and want to read more fics with him in it!

I LOVE the direction this is going. I am torn between anticipating the suspense and wanting it all NOW! I really like the way you are unfolding this and not just jumping in PWP. For this one, the slower narrative is fantastic.